Ellie(:

LMFAO. I freakin' loved this. So well written and I was laughing through the whole thing. Although I am A Die-Hard-Twilight fan, I loved this. Mocking Edward is shockingly easy, ...

Wow! That was a great story. Is there going to be a sequel? The only flaws I didn't like was you couldn't tell who the people were. Such as what ...

Incredible! Holly is such a... an oustanding charecter. So vivid, and lifelike. Like you could jump into the screen and shake some sense into that girl. Outstanding, Beautiful, Abosultley inverccible.

Absolutely amazing. Question, what exactly is this about? Love, sex, suicide? I would maybe consider shaping it up and confrming what it's about. Any of the options seem great, it's ...

That's incredible! I would not have been able to make something like that. I love the concept and all. It's really very touching and makes you think. Although I do ...

Very very nice. I loved, "It should never be spoken of, but everyone talks of it." Incredibly touching and un-belivingly true . :D