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Re: Secrets of Suburbia: Skeletons, Addiction & Betrayal (CHAPTER 3)
Thank you so much for being honest with me, first of all. Reading the part of your comment when you said that I needed to describe why Nathan was so ...
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Re: Secrets of Suburbia: Skeletons, Addiction & Betrayal (CHAPTER 2)
Hey there Noelle! Thank you so much for your feedback. I really appreciate it! :D
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Re: Secrets of Suburbia: Skeletons, Addiction & Betrayal (CHAPTER 5)
Thanks for the feedback! I'm surprised this is still getting reviews because I've been out of commission for quite a few weeks. I like that you think that Mark doesn't ...
Sep 4, 2014 -
Re: Secrets of Suburbia: Skeletons, Addiction & Betrayal (CHAPTER 5)
I sure will keep you updated! I also should have specified where the last part was in the timeline, which I did (this was set a month after Leah slept ...
Aug 14, 2014 -
Re: Secrets of Suburbia: Skeletons, Addiction & Betrayal Chapter 1
Thanks for your feedback! I really appreciate it. I thought that it was appropriate for Leah to tell the story because what will happen later in the story will affect ...
Aug 12, 2014 -
Re: Secrets of Suburbia: Skeletons, Addiction & Betrayal (CHAPTER 4)
Hey, thanks for your support. I will definitely keep your suggestions in mind a when using certain phrases and words. It really helps me to analyze my writing even more. ...
Aug 12, 2014 -
Re: I'll make Writers out of you
This was EPIC! Not only did this poem lift my spirits and make me want to watch Mulan, but now I feel inspired enough to write at least 100 pages ...
Aug 11, 2014 -
Re: Secrets of Suburbia: Skeletons, Addiction & Betrayal (CHAPTER 2)
Sure! I didn't know that you could tag another user. Thanks for letting me know! I will try to post tomorrow morning before I head to work if I have ...
Aug 11, 2014 -
Re: Secrets of Suburbia: Skeletons, Addiction & Betrayal Chapter 1
Thank you for the feedback. I was hoping that you would realize that the set up of the plot with the movie! Your support really does mean a lot to ...
Aug 11, 2014 -
Re: Secrets of Suburbia: Skeletons, Addiction & Betrayal Chapter 1
Hey there! Just letting you know that I changed my username from Luv4Polynesia to Elizabeth Fiction because I've had that name since 2011. I just thought it was time for ...
Aug 11, 2014 -
Re: Secrets of Suburbia: Skeletons, Addiction & Betrayal Chapter 1
Be sure to check out chapter two as well! :)
Aug 11, 2014 -
Re: Secrets of Suburbia: Skeletons, Addiction & Betrayal Chapter 1
Thanks for pointing it out to me. I did mean to put "into" between "moved" and "an" but I think it was a typo. I sometimes type chapters using my ...
Aug 11, 2014 -
Re: Secrets of Suburbia: Skeletons, Addiction & Betrayal Chapter 1
Thank you so much! I was hoping that someone would catch on to the beginning theme of my story and it's like you read my mind! I don't want to ...
Aug 10, 2014 -
Re: Behind
Usually I am a very serious person, but don't make me laugh. When I laugh I really cannot stop. I was a having a pretty meh day until I read ...
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Re: Violins
Violins are my favorite instrument, too! Please post more of your work! :D
Aug 10, 2014
