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Thank you!!

Thank you!

Thanks for your suggestion! I know that's something I need to work on, but I;m so used of just free writing poems that when I structure it in even stanzas ...

Thank you! I agree with some lines are too wordy and that's something I need to improve on. 5th Stanza was hard to structure, but I'll take you suggestion. To ...

Yes "Him" is referring to God. I didn't want to just put God so I decided to put "Him". Thank you! :-)

Thanks!

Hey! I'm Elizabeth and I've got a review for your poem! First, I really liked your poem's title because it really attracts an individual to read and wonder what it ...

Thanks! I really appreciate it! I should of edited my spelling on here, but I'm still trying to get the hang of the site. I agree that I should add ...

Thanks! :-)

Thanks it means a lot! :-)

Thanks a lot! :-) Thanks for your suggestion, I'll defiantly do that on my next poem

I think you did a great job! There's a lot of imagery in this, which I love because it really helps the reader imagine what is occurring. Awesome job