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Re: Bleed
Hi, Story! Thanks for the request. You've gotten some really good critiques on this piece so far and I don't want to be too repetitive, so this will be a ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The Waking Hours (3/3)
Eviiiiiiiiiiiiii. :D You have no idea how happy I am that you posted this! I've really enjoyed reading this story and watching the characters grow and change in such a ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: A Corrupted Angel (Working Title) Prologue
Hi Stel! Thanks for the request -- I apologize for this being late! Anyhoo. I think you have a great start so far and have planted interesting seeds as far ...
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 5)
Hey Skins! So, I'm so glad you posted this! I've been waiting for this next part anxiously ever since I finished the reading and reviewing the last. I like this ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Deleted 4
Lumi! Hi! Thanks much for the request. :) It was a real pleasure reading this. Have you ever heard the song "It's All Coming Back to Me Now" by Celine ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Artful Creatures Chapter 1
Hello, Tedus! Here I am at last to review this piece! I am incredibly sorry that this took so long, but I am here now. So, I pretty much agree ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Powerless
Hi! Thanks for the request. :) So! I think you have some good stuff in here. The flow and rhythm were nice -- they were simple enough that the reader ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: One Country, Two Worlds part 2
Hi! It's me again. :) So, I read this second part and I think that you do a good job continuing the threads you began in the first part. I ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: One Country, Two Worlds [Part 1]
Hi there! Here as requested. So, I like this story a lot and I hope you do well with it in school -- it has a lot of good stuff ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: Mirror World (Contest Entry)
Hi, Tiger! Here I am to review -- thanks for the request! You've already gotten a lot of good feedback on this story already, so I'm not going to drone ...
Jan 19, 2011 -
Re: Ephemeral Girl
Hello, Persephoneia! Here I am to review your poem. Sorry this took so long -- I'm not great at reviewing poetry, but I shall try my absolute best. Anyhoo! I ...
Jan 19, 2011 -
Re: Only You, edit #1 {contest entry}
Hi, Pari! Here as requested. First, I wish you the best of luck in the contest -- I was hoping to enter, but I fell rather short on ideas. As ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Title Irrelevent Because the Story is Being Rewritten (ch1)
Hey, Emmy. :) Here as requested -- sorry it took me so long to get you this! Anyway, I liked this chapter and I found it to be easy to ...
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: You could have (edited)
Hey, Yuri! Thanks for the request; I'm glad that I got to read this. In general, I thought this was an interesting idea and it was neat how it played ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 4)
Hi Skins! Thanks for the request -- I'm glad I got to this! So, I don't really have much to say concerning this part because I thought it was especially ...
Jan 9, 2011