Elfsongs

Thank you so much! For some reason, my office program capitalizes 'he said' and sometimes I am honestly just too lazy to go back and correct it. I'm not sure ...

Wow thank you so much! This is insanely helpful!!! Most of the stuff you mentioned I actually did catch myself, I just haven't changed it yet, particularly Finn's reaction to ...

Oh I'm so happy you like it! I've written about these guys many times--in fact, I've started the same story three different times, but this time I have a bit ...

Oh thank you so much for the review!!! Yes I noticed I had a 'he' in there shortly after I posted it, but I was just so sleepy I didn't ...

Yes yes good very attractive ;) Aw I'm glad I always feel mean writing comments, but your improvement makes me feel happy!!! My college english classes payed off!

thank you very much for the review! I'm glad you like it!!! I'm really good at run-on sentences, so thanks for pointing that out haha! I do it all the ...

THAT'S cool :)

Lovely! Yes I will most certainly read your other version! Thanks for telling me about it!

I have a lot more written. I like introducing characters slowly so that we can learn a little bit about them at a time, you know? I like the mystery ...

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"Citizens would be enjoying a break from the usually busy week and taking their well earned coin to the taverns and drinking them away merrily but not on this stormy ...