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Thank you so much, Mahira! The poem was written to my best friend, whom I met here on YWS. She and I both have bipolar disorder and ADHD, and that's ...

Thanks for another review, Lanseloot! I'll work on all those things you mentioned, they're great points. And yeah, they definitely are a little on the short side, I'm working on ...

Thanks shade! And oof, yeah, I'll fix that, thanks for noticing.

Thanks, lanseloot!

Wow, another q uality review! Thanks! Yeah, I was definitely going for disconcerting. I want N.E.R.O. to feel a bit too human. And as for whether he can read Daniel's ...

Thanks for another awesome review! It's awesome that you did all four segments, thank you so much. To answer your questions, N.E.R.O. has access to both his host humans' senses, ...

Hey Q, thanks for another awesome review! They are in the same ship, just in full-body restraints that keep their mouths closed(so they still have teeth after splashing down). That's ...

I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'll let you know for sure when I finish the next chapter. Thanks for the review!

Thanks for another review, Tenyo! I'm glad you liked it. Yeah, I definately want to flesh out the characters a lot more. Joshua is shaping up nicely, but I feel ...

Hey Q, thanks for the review! I definitely will expand Verias's reaction to seeing the planet, that's a great idea, and I know just what to say, too. I never ...

Thanks Tenyo! There is a prologue , but it's pretty short and I don't know if it totally fixes the issue. I'll look at rewriting some of it to be ...

Thanks Haley! That's funny about glasteel, I had it that way until just a minute before I published. I guess my brain thought there should be more "s"s in there ...

Thanks Loonz! Good eye on the comma, I totally missed that. And yeah, the 'wet grey hole' was meant to be a little gross like you said, but if it ...

Thank you so much, Delirium!