Elesium

Thanks for reviewing! This was really helpful! I'll be taking notes and editing as I go~ Also, Emily is actually not the main character ^^;

Thanks for the review! Really glad you liked it! cx Past and present tense have always been an issue of mine. xc I shall go back and edit that to ...

Thank you!!

Thank you!!

Hiya! Thanks for deciding to review this!! cx I honestly have no idea what I was thinking when I wrote 'Ellie'. O.o I shall have to edit that later... Thanks ...

Hello! Thanks for the review!! I'll be using this and correcting mistakes in the next few days, so thanks for pointing those out~!

Thanks!! This helped out a lot! :D (That link is really helpful as well) I shall be editing this soon!

Hehe, danke! cx

Thanks for the review! c: I use ellipses too much I know, I'll try and take some of those out! I had also originally hid that it was a female ...

Heheh, danke! Past and present tense always seem to be my biggest weak spot. xc Hopefully as time goes I'll teach myself not to write like that. ^-^

Thanks for the review! Gave me a lot of motivation~! ^^;

Thanks for the review. I needed some harsh feedback, it helped a lot. ^-^

Thanks for another review! :) Past and present have always been one of my biggest issues :x I don't know why but I always seem to do that. Thanks for ...

I'm not usually one for poetry. [Truth be told I hate most poetry] Though I must say that I love this! I would certainly want to live in that world ...

Thanks for doing the review! This is really helpful! I think I will change it to where he doesn't kill her. It wouldn't change the story line that I planned ...