Elena_Ravenhill

Just simply amazing, its just memorizing. I was utterly entranced by your work, It has such a smooth and sensual flow. Keep up the good work.

Holy Moly, what a piece! This is very good, nice flow and constant rhythm you have. its like a newpaper article written in a poem. Keep wrtiting expecting great things ...

Thus far it has a nice bittersweet, it just missing something. Nevertheless, it has a nice flow to it. Hopefully you find that missing piece in your poem. Keep writing.

Thus far it has a nice bittersweet, it just missing something. Nevertheless, it has a nice flow to it. Hopefully you find that missing piece in your poem. Keep writing.

I really enjoy reading it, even so it needs a bit more into it. I can sense the rush of emotion that you have for this, but it seem to ...

Could be longer thought it kinda cute though.

Well The Two by four didn't fit it killed the mood, if you used another sort of weapon it would fit perfect. Nevertheless your poem is lovely, I loved the ...

Again Thank you all for your help. I love to write and I'll keep writing.

I thank you for all of your advise, I'm trying to write it in paper than in the computer. Letting the word flow into the pen, then to the paper. ...