Elelel

*applause and cheering* Ok, basically this is so I get some soup. I don't know a thing about poetry. So I'm not going to be very helpful. Yeah, so I ...

(note: There will be spoilers) I quite liked Ergon. I wouldn't say it was my favourite book ever, but I did quite enjoy it. Some of the characters annoyed me ...

I enjoyed this! It really appealed to me. It was sweet, but not sweet to the point of sugar induced coma. I like that sort of story. Is it a ...

Well, there's not really much, if anything, I can say that Crysi hasn't already covered, but I'll give it a go. First up, I enjoyed your piece. I liked the ...

I found it! Recent Literary Additions ... tee hee. First up, I like the idea that summer's just a mind set. That seems true to me, and you described the ...

YAY!!! Australia! The red rugged earth ascended steeply, piercing the blue sky like a bloody dagger through soft velvet. I like this imagery. I'm not sure about the word "ascended" ...

I found this very enjoyable. Mabe you could space it out more? With actual spaces between paragraphs or something? The mass of the text is a little daunting. It wasn’t ...

I think I'd better refrain from commenting on the Bush/demon aspect. I'm not American so it's probably not really polite for me to join in. There were a couple of ...

YAY!!! I loved it too! It's like a story for writers. Like how there's big bedtime children's books with loads of different stories in them. This is like a story ...

Bubbles ... I can honestly say I didn't understand a word of that. CONGRADULATIONS! It's an amazing feat, not to be understood in the slightest so I think I shall ...

Smaur probably has a better idea about exactly what's going on ... but I shall of course do what I can. Knowing nothing of the reasons for the orange light ...

Do you feel a little miffed when someone says you're "good for your age"? I know comments like that aren't taken well by some people. But it is good. And ...

Payback time! Let's see if I can help you like you helped me. First up, I really don't know the answer to the question of chapter per thread or all ...

Is this your 'teenaged angst' piece? I really must congradulate you for managing to describe it to me as teenaged angst without it actually appearing to have any angst in ...

Is this mostly just to express the plot? I wasn't sure. Well, there's a lot of grammatical errors in that. You keep putting spaces before commas and full stops, which ...