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Re: How long has this been sitting here?
I don't know how, but please get this thing published outside YWS. It's seriously one of the best poems I've read in a long, long time. First of all, I'm ...
May 31, 2017 -
Re: The worst time to encounter an earthquake is when you are riding a bike.
First of all, you get 1000 points for the A* title. Second of all, how on Earth did you manage to convey so much in, what, 7 short lines? I ...
May 31, 2017 -
Re: read between the lines some time
What a striking poem! OoO It's amazing! I love how you've conveyed the emotions felt by the protagonist and executed the whole "Read between the lines" thing. Also, the theme ...
May 31, 2017 -
Re: Dust On My Fingers
What an interesting concept! I'm sure that dust could have many interesting things to tell, perhaps yes, even more than books. Dust remembers times long gone by and, unlike paper, ...
May 31, 2017