ElaBrave

Thanks for the reviews everyone! I understand what you're saying, June and Juliet (lovely name, by the way :smt001 ), and will edit the poem in due course. Thankyou for ...

That's very kind, thankyou.

Thanks! I made some adjustments. I hope it sounds better.

I'm not going to crit you as it's already been done, but GOOD POEM! I like it!