ElJoker

seems promising. A good prologue that it. it summarizes or rather gives a glimpse of what awaits further in the story. I hope to read the full story soon. keep ...

Hey Dark, thanks for the review, yeah i guess you are right for the repetition problems... i didn't spot it when i proofread... well that's what reviews are for right? ...

heyy LouisCypher.! i liked your review and i think you understood the story all out. :) i'll take your advices into consideration and try harder next time! i'll be posting ...

hello Trident! thanks for the review... yeah i guess you are right in many of your points, but as i said in the description, this is just a small story ...

Heyy Bellanova! :) thanks.... its really great to feel appreciated. keep track on my works, i'll be posting more soon.! thanks...

Hello Mistielovesyou! thank you for the review... i really liked your review and wanted to thank you to help me discover my mistakes and errors. i'll try to improve and ...