Echolair

Drowsy! [I can't help call you by it instead of Kaye. -_-] I hate you for being so fascinating. I mean your work, it's fascinating. -_- Lol, down to the ...

[s]Scratch[/s] kindly take away the second stanza please. Too mushy and irksome for your sake. Some days I wish I were a fable--I'd be satisfied knowing that soon you'd outgrow ...

Lol. Nice. :p The only thing that distracted me was the usage of verb tenses. I take it that you used the past tense at the beginning then rushed into ...

I could [s]here [/s] I'm certain you mean "hear" the wind. A defining sound that shook me to my deepest core. I lay Aren't you using the past tense, why ...

I disagree a bit with the comment up there. -_- I think this was adorably written. One thing though, there were too much info dump about the rose that it ...

Day Three The funeral is hell. Relative after relative walks up to me. They hug me until I can’t breath, they kiss me with their sticky lips, they cry in ...

*stares blankly* I'm not sure i understand the story. Or is it just we aren't supposed to because only Set could? You lost me at that moment of taxi cruelty[lol:D] ...

Hello there. As for your friend who wrote this, she pretty much could write but then again, there are just these inevitable nuisances that she has to take care of. ...

I'm not rabid, I say yet again. :P You did quite a nice attempt on a comedic approach however some petty things about it annoyed me. Take sloth for instance. ...

*gasps* I FRIGGIN LOVE IT. -_- I disagree as well to the first 2 comments because they simply didn't read it for what it is. It was absolutely brilliant that ...

Hey there. :) I gotta be honest, although it was okay, i can't help but be annoyed by the "intellectual-wannabe feel" interjection there in your poem. :( As much as ...

I swing around each tall lamppost --I guess you are now well aware that you have to separate the lamp from the post, in short: lamp post. But seriously, screw ...

Oh the great one has stamped his presence in your precious little page. :D To think of it, he was actually being NICE. Screw dorkwads, i'll happily critique this cute ...

The way you wrote it is definitely unusual, very poetic-like but nonetheless I enjoyed it. Held me wanting to kick the crap out of that cheater. LOL Another, I thought ...

That was when I tasted the saltiness of blood in my mouth and knew it dribbled from my lips. AWESOME LINE. 0.o Gyeah i liked it a lot. Stories with ...