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Re: The perfect boy
I love this story. I always appreciate stories that tell from multiple people's perspectives. This short story does a good job with that! I have been both of you in ...
Nov 14, 2023 -
Re: Just Me and My Friend [short story]
Hello! I'm here to review your story! WHAT WAS GOOD First, I love how you put so much meaning into just three paragraphs. I caught many things from this short ...
Oct 7, 2023 -
Re: Oh, Moon
I rarely write poetry or read poetry. However, I saw your title and I had to read your poem. WHAT WAS GOOD 1. Your title caught my attention. "Oh, Moon" ...
Oct 7, 2023 -
Re: King of the Court - 1
STORY I like how you show Alex and Thea's sibling rivalry without actually calling it sibling rivalry. As someone with siblings, I can say that you wrote it very realistically. ...
Mar 25, 2023 -
Re: The Jacobs
THE STORY I like the way the characters see weirder and weirder things as the story progresses. It adds to the overall funny and spooky-ish vibe that goes throughout the ...
Mar 24, 2023 -
Re: Shadow's Rising Wing 2-3 Interlude
Hello! I would like to give you a few grammar corrections. I hope you find them helpful. 1. In paragraph 4, you wrote "Come escort". After "come" there should be ...
Jan 29, 2023 -
Re: Evangeline’s story
Okay. I'd like to give you a comment/review. My thoughts on this story. 1. I liked how the story made my heart pound, even though it was short. 2. I ...
Jan 7, 2023 -
Re: a playground date
Okay, I have a few things I would like to mention. 1. I noticed a spelling error with "waiting" in the sentence "Lorlei might be wating for me." You may ...
Jan 7, 2023