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Re: A walk with Jesus
The pain was excruciating and as the dark red blood poured out from the bullet wound, it caused the energy within me to diminish. The beginning would be more riveting ...
Oct 7, 2011 -
Re: Listen
Every time you saw her, I filled your head with images of hatred, disgust, and imperfection. I understand the fragmentary format that seems to be happening in this poem; I ...
Oct 6, 2011 -
Re: The (True) Story of Hansel and Gretel : Intro
Hey there, I'm Echo! I'll be reviewing today, mmkay? I’m not an evil witch, if that’s what you think I am. I’m just a simple candy maker, nothing more, nothing ...
Jul 24, 2009 -
Re: Chapter 1. Fire & Dark
Okay, Guten tag! I'm Echo, and will be another reviewer of yours on your story! I'll start with my nitpicks, then go into a breakdown of the setting, character, and ...
Jun 11, 2009
