Earthfire713

I just barely read this, and I have to say I like it better than "The Hero and the Crown". Less dull, with a more interesting plot.

This was beautiful. I especially loved how you used the word "you". It made me think that Martha was standing by Susie's grave as she talked to her.

Thanks everyone for the reviews! I'm glad you guys liked it. I'll post more when I have a chance to revise a little.

You published this? That's awesome!

I love it! You should write a story about them! :smt001

Thanks for reviewing, everyone! Your comments were very helpful!

I LOVED The Hunger Games! It was so addicting, I could literally not put it down! :smt001

I liked this! For a moment, I thought that it should belong in fantasy fiction, but I love the original way of telling this story. Great job!

Your picture is awesome! How did you do that?

Wow. This was a really cool beginning. I don't know what to say, because I think Stella got everything, except good job! PM me if you add the rest!

Really interesting so far. I hope you're going to post more of it soon. I couldn't find anything wrong with it, though.

Wow. This was a great story. You did a good job at drawing me into the action. The only thing that you need to change is try and make the ...

I like that! It's very funny and your interview format is original! Keep writing!

Thanks for the reviews! I also have another question: does the non-speaking thing seem too cliched? Should I change it or keep it the way it is?

That was amazing and you had great imagery. I could see everything in my head as it happened. Great job!