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Thank you for the review and suggestions! I have to admit to myself this isn't the best chapter I've written, and once I finish with the first draft, this is ...

Thank you for the review! It's great to hear feedback. I was worrying that this chapter could be a bit of an explanation dump. Thanks for the suggestions. This is ...

Thank you for the review!

Thanks for reviewing this chapter! I really appreciate you pointing out the spelling error. That always helps! I'm also glad that you thought the world building was good. I often ...

Thanks for replying to my review! I see where you're coming from on a lot of the stuff, especially the GummyGators! Anyways, I wish you luck on your story!

Great! It should come up in a couple of chapters!

You're welcome!

I'm really glad I read this story, because in light of recent events, I think it captures what's going on in a lot of people's minds.

Thanks for all your positive remarks! I'm glad that you were able to imagine everything easily - that's something I always worry about! I'm very glad that you related to ...

Thanks so much for your review! You brought up many good points. It means a whole lot to get back good, critical advice on my story! Your first point about ...