ERANBEAR

Great job wonderfully told exceptionally devised. I LOVE IT!!! the story line was a little confusing :smt003 :smt002 :smt001

Hi it was beautiful although maybe if you said as if she were being branded :smt003 :smt003 ERANBEAR peace out type on!!!!

Awake my darling, Hear your children crying. They fear pain in your soul, They see vein as you moan, Moan your secret life away. Won’t you kneel and pray? Before ...

[quote="Sionarama"]We silently trudged up the hill. it was dark and the full moon was hidden behind ominous clouds. Finally, we reached it. It was a great manor and its windows ...

great plot not much of a conflict though nice job not over complicating the character :smt003 i think it needs something but i cant put my finger on it :?: ...