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Well... I have read worse stuff. I don't want to sound mean but you're spending too much time describing, the first chapter needs more action. It's the first one that ...
Nov 5, 2007
Well... I have read worse stuff. I don't want to sound mean but you're spending too much time describing, the first chapter needs more action. It's the first one that ...
Nov 5, 2007
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