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Re: Change?
You did a very good job using details from the time and Taoism details. I also liked how you didn't just tell us what happened you described it in detail ...
Mar 11, 2016 -
Re: The story about china
I really liked the ending of your story and the action in the book. I wonder if you could have checked your grammar a little bit more and your spelling. ...
Mar 11, 2016 -
Re: Flowing with the Tao and Going with the Flow
Hello Isaiah, I really liked how your story was full of Taoism facts and details and how your character has to do with the actual event of Taoism spreading. Although ...
Mar 11, 2016 -
Re: The Worker of Dreams
I really like the way you made you story and the plot is good. I wonder though, if you could have checked your grammar a bit more, and understood how ...
Mar 11, 2016