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DustyCat

  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: To the man who lives in my closet...

    At first I thought that it was a metaphor for depression but the end threw me off. This line, 'Someone who could never be loved unless they changed their appearance ...

    Apr 2, 2020
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Girl with a Thousand Cranes

    The imaging is beautiful, the story has got a different slant and I like how it starts. I find it rather intriguing. In the beginning, you use the title 'Bhikkhu' ...

    Apr 2, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: The Bridge to Nowhere

    Hi :) I love it! The first thing it made me think of was Alice in Wonderland. ' Had no ceiling, floor or wall.' - Maybe change the 'or' to ...

    Apr 2, 2020
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Script

    Hi :) In my opinion, the twists makes it. I really like the bending together of three different time frames, creating an unexpected picture within a picture feel. However, this ...

    Apr 1, 2020


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