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Re: To the man who lives in my closet...
At first I thought that it was a metaphor for depression but the end threw me off. This line, 'Someone who could never be loved unless they changed their appearance ...
Apr 2, 2020 -
Re: The Girl with a Thousand Cranes
The imaging is beautiful, the story has got a different slant and I like how it starts. I find it rather intriguing. In the beginning, you use the title 'Bhikkhu' ...
Apr 2, 2020 -
Re: The Bridge to Nowhere
Hi :) I love it! The first thing it made me think of was Alice in Wonderland. ' Had no ceiling, floor or wall.' - Maybe change the 'or' to ...
Apr 2, 2020 -
Re: The Script
Hi :) In my opinion, the twists makes it. I really like the bending together of three different time frames, creating an unexpected picture within a picture feel. However, this ...
Apr 1, 2020
