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Kiss in the Rain - I'm glad that you liked it! Shadowsoldier - Could you tell me exactly what needed to be worked on in the transitions? Did they not ...

he he... buddy movies! I think that Grif should have a fun application process for choosing said rookie. Maybe they have to complete a certain number of quests or summat? ...

Could you clarify what you meant, please? Did you want more information on them or did you get confused over who was who? Exactly which characters did you think could ...

Chapter 2 The sun was low in the sky as Kynbessne knocked on the door. She’d stopped to wash off the extra make-up that Jennika had applied and to let ...

Wiggy - thank you. I kinda felt that the opening didn't flow right, but I couldn't tell whether it was just my over-critical side coming out or if other people ...

Thank you both for commenting... Eleinasari - I do intend to make a novel with this, but at the moment I'm just playing around with characters. In all likelyhood this ...

There's nothing to apologize for. We're all here to help each other out. I look forward to seeing more of your work around the site.

Ivy is Arieda, if I'm not mistaken. I read it, Phoenix, and after getting over the fact that I'm dead, I loved it. I'll come back and give a more ...

Danke danke! *runs off to wash her hair*

"Grif moved into the room where the Cadets had been shoved. They were playing cards. There gear was stowed for now. " Wrong "there", dearie. It should be "their". Either ...

head/desk y'all know what I meant.

Will Smith? *gets slightly excited and tries to hide it* But can we have Will Smith from I, Robot instead of Will Smith from MIB... so much better in my ...

lol, Snoink. Getting a little carried away? *hurries to make sure that all her apostrophes are in the right places* Dusky said. She aimed the gattling gun and pressed the ...

Ha ha ha! Alright... If I have to be sore at someone for being "smarter, faster, and better" tan me, I want to shoot something. *looks at Grif with wide, ...

Haha... he's secretly in love with Phoenix and Dusky. :P *blinks* Both of us? *isn't sure if she wants to be in this story after all* jk. Anywho, Grif... Keep ...