Ducksworthy

I must say I really did enjoy this! I read it and at first thought it wasn't going to be my kind of thing but it really did grab me ...

Well the two above me have given the various, in-depth suggestions so I'll just give some of my general thoughts to your piece, because it would be a waste of ...

Pavel Ippolitovich disliked his shackles, he disliked that, upon walking into the cart, he had stepped into animal droppings, and he especially disliked that he was going to be killed ...

Now I read this thinking "this really is rubbish writing" and I honestly thought it was. At first. Then I got the end and thought, it seems to be written ...

Ace of Threes Some say that Fate governs our lives. Others say that it’s God. I don’t believe in either. Maybe it would be easier if I did. I could ...