Dreamy

Wow, that was quite pretty and cute. With the paintings, liked it a lot. :) Keep writing!

Yeah, you understood perfectly. And thank you for the comment.

I'm sorry, I just had to edit it, to point a silly mistake that is often neglected. And I'm glad that I was helpful!

Don't be.You did a very good job reviewing my story. I mean I was desperate for someone to be more critic, because icing me or my work is not going ...

Thank you for the link. And I purposely narrated the story in this manner so as to create something new, but it seems to be failure. :P So I guess ...

Oh, thank you for those references websites. I will check on them. Thank you so much. :D

Aww,I'm very glad that you liked my review. I should say that your experiment is a quite successful one. You should definitely try to experiment on more things and that's ...

It's definitely not a story though. In a odd way it sounds poetic. Like a love note maybe.

It's lyrical, it will go well if you rap it :P

Well, it's a pity that I can't make my readers follow my emotions. And I'm sorry for making you feel confused. Maybe that's just me. About that line, I'm exactly ...

Sorry for this. I hate when this happens.

What? A poem? I called your story a poem? :P So dumb! Sorry for that.And I'm really glad that this was helpful. And I would love to have a look ...

Of course it is.:)

You are the author. It does sounds cool though. So go ahead and try it. And make it interesting!!! :) Good luck!!!

It felt like looking in the mirror!