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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lily

    The poem is not entirely about the flower. It's about the girl who is dreaming an impossible dream. Like, she's warring against Mother Nature and that's the war she cannot ...

    Oct 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lily

    No, I've not heard about the book, sadly. D: Yes, I was conscious about the word "swayed" and the meaning it implies. If you take a closer look at the ...

    Oct 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Pretence

    That's where YWSers' leave their commet/review. c:

    Sep 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: lost Lilly of Lilliput

    Haha! Congrats and thank you for the review. :)

    Aug 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: cirrus

    Every time I read your work I learn few new words, and those words seem like they are invented especially for you. They speak for themselves and the story-oh man! ...

    Aug 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The couple's fight.

    Uhh, I totally agree with you. I don't like this myself. =/ I guess, I was trying so hard to rhyme. But hey, your thoughts are much appreciated. c: Happy ...

    Aug 22, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Ghost

    Guess than I made my point right out. :P

    Aug 18, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Ghost

    I agree. I'm still finding my way around poems. And this is just my "pathetic attempt" to rhyme. I don't blame you for not understanding. It is just my incapability ...

    Aug 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: lost Lilly of Lilliput

    I see your point. Thank you for the review. :D

    Aug 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: spray paint on my skin

    That's

    Aug 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, Realistic Re: A satire of Satire

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Why the wind howls

    Hello! I liked this story. I dig for stories like these. :P I'm sorry, I'm not here to rip it apart, because this is just too beautiful to do so. ...

    Aug 2, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: 5 Ways to get into the Literary Spotlight

    I think you hit 'em all in the feels, ma man. Right in the feels.

    Aug 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: lost Lilly of Lilliput

    She was supposed to be a witch, but according to this poem she's just a painting. You are right about the other things, I just got carried away and I'm ...

    Aug 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: lost Lilly of Lilliput

    You're a damn fine poet, Dreamy, did you know that? *flips hair* No, I did not know that. Thank you, though. xD I'm all smiling, now. :P About the suggestions, ...

    Aug 1, 2014


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