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Re: Lily
The poem is not entirely about the flower. It's about the girl who is dreaming an impossible dream. Like, she's warring against Mother Nature and that's the war she cannot ...
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Re: Lily
No, I've not heard about the book, sadly. D: Yes, I was conscious about the word "swayed" and the meaning it implies. If you take a closer look at the ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: Pretence
That's where YWSers' leave their commet/review. c:
Sep 18, 2014 -
Re: lost Lilly of Lilliput
Haha! Congrats and thank you for the review. :)
Aug 30, 2014 -
Re: cirrus
Every time I read your work I learn few new words, and those words seem like they are invented especially for you. They speak for themselves and the story-oh man! ...
Aug 30, 2014 -
Re: The couple's fight.
Uhh, I totally agree with you. I don't like this myself. =/ I guess, I was trying so hard to rhyme. But hey, your thoughts are much appreciated. c: Happy ...
Aug 22, 2014 -
Re: Ghost
Guess than I made my point right out. :P
Aug 18, 2014 -
Re: Ghost
I agree. I'm still finding my way around poems. And this is just my "pathetic attempt" to rhyme. I don't blame you for not understanding. It is just my incapability ...
Aug 18, 2014 -
Re: lost Lilly of Lilliput
I see your point. Thank you for the review. :D
Aug 10, 2014 -
Re: spray paint on my skin
That's
Aug 9, 2014 - Re: A satire of Satire Aug 5, 2014
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Re: Why the wind howls
Hello! I liked this story. I dig for stories like these. :P I'm sorry, I'm not here to rip it apart, because this is just too beautiful to do so. ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: 5 Ways to get into the Literary Spotlight
I think you hit 'em all in the feels, ma man. Right in the feels.
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: lost Lilly of Lilliput
She was supposed to be a witch, but according to this poem she's just a painting. You are right about the other things, I just got carried away and I'm ...
Aug 1, 2014 -
Re: lost Lilly of Lilliput
You're a damn fine poet, Dreamy, did you know that? *flips hair* No, I did not know that. Thank you, though. xD I'm all smiling, now. :P About the suggestions, ...
Aug 1, 2014
