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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Wrong Era Chapter 3: The Forgotten Hero.

    Hey, Moalex! Dreamy here for another short review. I had mentioned in my last review how much the transition from one chapter to another suits the narration, i.e. each chapter ...

    Jul 21, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Wrong Era Chapter 2: Struggles

    Hey, Moalex! OH! Cecilia is alive?! And she has magic powers?! Wha-what?! I enjoyed reading this chapter, it had everything going on. You explained the accident, the time that has ...

    Jul 20, 2019
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: Birthday Balloons

    Hi, tronks. Dreamy here for a short review. I liked this story. It was an effortless read. The entire story worked as a beautiful metaphor, Noah approaching the table of ...

    Jul 18, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Hypochondriac Chapters 1-6

    Hey, Dreamy here for a short review. It's amazing to read this draft again and to realise how I've missed some parts. Especially, the one where you compare Noah's mother ...

    Jul 17, 2019
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: "Help! My Heads Stuck in the Clouds!"

    Hey, Horisun! Let's get the review started. So I read in your description that this was written based on a prompt which was an interesting prompt, I liked how clever ...

    Jul 17, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: Bound by Blood

    Hello there! This was a good read. Though it had too much going on from the beginning to the end. There was no breather. I think it was interesting way ...

    Jul 12, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Science Fiction Re: Everything Is Not What It Seems ( 8 years later)

    Hello there, Dreamy here to show some love to the work that's been sitting here for a while--Hi! I'm going to echo what Moalex has said in their review. This ...

    Jul 12, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Wrong Era Chapter 1: The Beginning of an End.

    Oh my god! What did I just read?! It was too much to take in! Ahhhhhhhh xD First of all, Hi. Second of all, I have to echo what Honora ...

    Jul 11, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Petal by Petal

    Hello, Salia. Hope you're doing well. There are not many realistic short stories in the site so when I saw this I immediately clicked to read. I was not disappointed. ...

    Jul 11, 2019
  • Short Story » Narrative, Other Re: Dream Vacation (More like: Dream Heaven)

    Hi, Liberty. Nice description of what your dream vacation would be like-- a deer and a horse, freshly baked cookies and all. You have also mentioned in your title that ...

    Jul 11, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Lohikarmen: A tale of humans and dragons (Chapter 8: A new home)

    Hello, Globoii. Interesting read. Well-written chapter. Hope you don't mind me reviewing a random chapter from the novel. Shervan, a rescued dragon is brought to the cave of his rescuers ...

    Jul 8, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Hypochondriac Chapter 4

    Hi, Moonlight! Such a short chapter, to my disappointment. :( (I WANT MORE!) ;) Ah, Noah. I still don't know what to make of him. I know it's too early ...

    Jul 8, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Hypochondriac: Chapters 1-3

    Hello, MoonlightForest! I love this! It is wonderfully written. All of the scenes came alive with your amazing descriptions. I'm invested in Noah and Ellie. To me, Noah reads like ...

    Jul 7, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Glowpeak Academy- Chapter Twelve

    Hi, SubSubLibrarian. This chapter was an interesting read. I haven't read any of the other chapters but that didn't stop me from understanding the story, guess this is a pretty ...

    Jul 7, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Boy And His Staff

    Hi! I'm here again for the second round. And since it's the second round, I guess I'll focus on what worked for me. Don't think it as a review but ...

    Jul 5, 2019


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