Dreamy

A little typo here: She'd been here a week already and as far as she could tell had never left the inn's premise How about you mentions Rory’s name after ...

Hey, you're back with another long chapter. lol Let me get to the suggestions and typos first: When they arrived at the Gilmore Manor Lorelai rang the doorbell. "When they ...

Awe, that was so sweet of Cecilia! I would have totally given her a hug but I think Jennifer must have just huffed and left the room. Dreamy here! Long ...

As far as I remember, this is the only chapter that had Mateo relaxed and at peace and not passed out or so self-conscious which makes me incredibly happy for ...

Here again! "It's just a centipede," When I read this I only wanted to know "how big?" Because the reaction Em gave ("blood curdling scream")made me believe that whatever she ...

Oh no, of all the chapters you made this chapter a short one! >.> HUMPF! To be honest, this is my favourite chapter of the three. I mean, I liked ...

Ah, Bromi! Again a very descriptive chapter. It was interesting to read and I was very surprised at how it did not start where it left off last chapter. It's ...

Hello there! Sorry for the delay in reviewing. Well, as I've already said in my previous review to you, you are one hell of a narrator. I feel like this ...

Hello there! Dreamy here to give a short review before I move on to reading the next chapters. I love how you have made Wind a character. I liked reading ...

Hello there! I was just wondering if all your chapters going to be this short? I understand that you're only still developing an idea but it'd be nice to see ...

Hey there! I thought I'll leave a quick review before moving on to part three. I read part one and I must say that I was really excited to see ...

LEAVE? Who left?! what?! o: I really liked this chapter. This is definitely my favourite of the four. We really got to know more about Jess and Lorelai except for ...

Hello there! Let's jump straight into the review. Typos first: “Rory stop!” her commanded in a boom voice. "Lorelai commanded..." Charleston had already made it clear that Jess on thin ...

Hey there! So first of all, I really like how you've written this chapter and how you're moving this story ahead. I'm very invested in this story now than I ...

Hello! Dreamy here to review. I saw the first chapter of this story posted and when I clicked on it to review, I noticed that there's a prologue so here ...