Dreamy

Oop, this was an emotional rollercoaster. It was interesting to read Welcome's efforts to over come, his way of compensating, the abuses he faced when he was a boy. I ...

Hello, it's me, again. I hope you're not bored to see a lot of me in your notifications. Huh. what can I say you've posted a lot of work and ...

Well, Fishr, there's something about your stories that I like on deeper level, it's crazy. Maybe it's because there aren't many realistic fiction writers here in the site and I'm ...

Hello, Fishr! I saw some of your works in the Green room, I was trying to find the first part to a story that you had written but I ended ...

Hah! Interesting way to end the chapter, it got me all curious. Let me address something first: this chapter had me so confused. For a second they were having food ...

Hello there! Saw chapter two of this story and I thought I'd drop in to give this a read through before I review that. This will be a short review ...

Hey, Aari! Dreamy here to give a short review. You have done a very good job with this story. I was left wanting to know more. The story premise was ...

Hey, Anamel! You already have two amazing reviews so I'll make this short. It's pretty clear that you didn't take time to go through this chapter while posting it here. ...

Hello there! I quite enjoyed reading this chapter. I liked how easy the story flowed though the content being a bit heavy. I know that the character is writing this ...

Hey there, democat! Finally here to catch up with the story. First, let me point out few typos: As me and Susan shop o notice that man everywhere "As Susan ...

Well, didn’t I take my time to review this. Okay, when you say Ren ran behind the car that Cecilia was in it made me ask why? Especially since he ...

Hey! Let's talk typos: She went straight to Jess’s room but he wasn’t there. He must have been feeling better. This is not really a typo but I just thought ...

Posting the chapters in parts are crazy GOOD for finding the typos,haha. So let's see the typos first: He whipped tables down, wash dishes and brought the trash out back ...

The things that I had difficulty understanding are already addressed by mellifera in their review so I won't repeat them. There's this one thing I'd like to suggest though: Jess ...

Oh, this is bad! Just simply bad. Typos first: Outwitting the moron to convince him to hand them over wouldn't be hard so why was he so nervous? I know ...