Dreamy

Hey there, I knew it wouldn't be fair to review a random chapter, so I went back and read all your previous chapter of this story. And I should say ...

Hey there, So you have introduced new characters in this chapter and I personally didn't like the fact because it felt like I was reading some other chapter from another ...

*Claps* You are amazing. Your stories are amazing. I just loved it way too much. xP The best read so far, for the day. I loved it to bits and ...

Hello there, This was a fantastic piece of work. I liked it a lot. You got an incredible voice for your characters and your narration was exceptional. I just loved ...

Hey there, Dreamy here to review. I came here and found and exceptional piece of work. I didn't find any mistakes or what so ever but a pleasing characterization and ...

Hey there, Dreamy here to review. This chapter was very intriguing. Let me go on with pointing out the typos,nitpicks. “HOLD IT RIGHT THERE JONATHAN EADES!" I strongly don't believe ...

Hey there, Dreamy here to review. This chapter was good, than the previous one, I'd say. What annoyed me was the fact that there were too many mystery hidden in ...

Hey there, Dreamy here to review. This was a good story. I felt like reading someones diary than a narrated story, because there wasn't enough dialogue exchanges but this was ...

Hey there, Dreamy here to review. This was really a very good piece of work. In the middle of the story I began to think what this really was and ...

Hey there, Dreamy here to review. This chapter seemed like it was written in some urgency.You have not quoted your dialogues, you have made everything into reported speech. I felt ...

Hey there, Dreamy here to review. I really liked this story. It was pure and was literally bounded with a simple and a single man's happiness. I really liked the ...

Hey there, Dreamy here to review. This work was quite intriguing. I really liked the way you have narrated your story, which made it more interesting. I couldn't really find ...

Hello there, Dreamy here to review. I knew not, until I read John's review that you have intently wrote this work in present tense. All the time while reading your ...

Hey there, Dreamy here to review. This is a pretty good work. I liked it. What really bothered me was your flow, it wasn't continuous. It felt like as if ...

Hey there, Dreamy here to review. This work gave me mixed emotions. This was very well written of course. I was able to connect to your main character. Her transformation ...