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Re: The Other Side: Prologue
O.O I seriously never thought you had this... this package in you. o.o Hello there! Dreamy here to review your awesome prologue xD I completely loved your description on that ...
May 26, 2014 -
Re: Intimacy
Hey there! Dreamy here to review your short story. This was a very simple story. Men talking about what the women want in sex. A typical guy talk. Though, I ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Theirs
Hey there! Dreamy here to review. Boy, am I nervous to review this? Hell, yea! >.> So, the whole purpose of the poem is to repeat certain line and give ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Can You Hear Me Cry
Hello Cesare! Dreamy here to give you a short review. :P This poem had a very good feeling. The contrasts/contradictions that you show cased in the poem had a very ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: The Looking Glass
I did enjoy this! :D Hey there! Dreamy here to review! This was a cool story. I liked it. I'm going to keep all the typos aside and review on ...
May 24, 2014 -
Re: The Need To Kill
Hello there! First and foremost, welcome to YWS! :D So, Dreamy here to review your horror filled work. It was a good start and a hopeful end. You gave me ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: The children who brought anarchy, destruction, and freedom: Prolog
Hello there! Dreamy here! You got a good start for a short story. It's actually new to see a prologue for a short story, in the first place. But hey, ...
May 19, 2014 -
Re: 1
Hi there! Dreamy here, once again. ;) You have done a good job with the fighting scene. It made me imagine and the imagination was wonderful on it's exploration. I ...
May 18, 2014 -
Re: The Siege, Prologue: Insane?
Hi! Dreamy here! I read the other reviews, they all have covered most of the parts. So, I don't have to repeat it, I suppose. xP The one thing you ...
May 12, 2014 -
Re: 1
Hey there! Let me get straight to the review. The first thing I noticed in your story is that you give a one line description of your characters. Though, that ...
May 10, 2014 -
Re: Gentle Sword Prologue.
Hello Alpha! First of all, welcome to YWS! And I'm here to review your "beginning of legacy" xP Okay, so you have an interesting story line but at the same ...
May 10, 2014 -
Re: Pretty Faces
Hello there, Ivy! Dreamy here to review your wonderful piece of work. I liked this "preface" of yours,thoroughly. Dark stuffs are my favourite things. Though, I see them a lot ...
May 9, 2014 -
Re: Diakrino- The Darkness within (chapter 4)
Hey there, mate! Dreamy here to review your amazing work. And I'm afraid this is going to be an incredibly long review. If it is, bare with me. If not, ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: She Will Be Judged Chapter 3
Hello there, Dreamy here to review your-let's say an "disturbing yet intriguing piece of work". First of all I wanted to congratulate you for your word selection. This must be ...
Apr 19, 2014 -
Re: House of the rising sun chapter 6
Hello there! Dreamy here to review your thriller story. :P You seem to grow/mature in your writings. So congrats. This is definitely better than your other chapters. :D I got ...
Apr 16, 2014
