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Re: Eyes Wide Shut 5.2
Hello there! I've taken utmost care not to repeat what these wonderful people have said but if I do, forgive meh. D: Before I dwell, let me point out the ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: rice and retrograde
Damien and Lisa? Yes, please.
May 27, 2015 -
Re: Melissa's Hobby
Hello there, Dreamy here for a short review. Before I start to fan-girl on your writing style, let me point out the things that need your attention. The first will ...
May 15, 2015 -
Re: 1
Okay, this chapter took me two full days to read. I don't know if it’s because I was bored or if this was too much to process. Hello there, here ...
May 3, 2015 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 3.3 (Edited)
Hello! Dreamy here to review your work as I promised howmanymoonsbefore? Since you have so many awesome reviews, I decided to review your work every two or three chapters. Sounds ...
Apr 30, 2015 -
Re: 1
Yello there! Did I promised this review four moons before? Well, better late than never, right? ;) We both know and have been through the problems of translating a work, ...
Apr 30, 2015 -
Re: A Bend in the Road
Hello there! Dreamy here to review your story. So, let go! I found this short story to be highly metaphorical which is appreciated. Let me point out few of the ...
Jan 28, 2015 -
Re: Dont go back
This was quite emotional. Hello there, Dreamy here to review your work. So, let go! As I said before, this was quite a decent piece of work and I agree ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Forget
Hello there.
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Way to Go, Dreamers!
Hello there, here as promised. So an article you say, but it felt more like a dialogue of an annoying character from a script. I very much understood the idea ...
Dec 30, 2014 -
Re: We are not alone
Hello there, darling. Lets get to business. You have this incredible power of making anything sound poetic and beautiful. I envy you for that, mademoiselle. But this short story, written ...
Dec 30, 2014 -
Re: Diakrino - The Darkness within (Preface/Introduction)
Hello there! :D I'm sorry it took me so long to review this work. I was held captive by my thoughts and stuffs. >_< Okay now, let's dive in. I ...
Dec 11, 2014 -
Re: Chapter one of the Infected Chronicles
Hello there, Dreamy here for a short review. So, let's get to business. This chapter was interesting but as I was reading, it become utterly distracting with the typos. Let ...
Nov 3, 2014 -
Re: The Girl at the Register
Well, hello there! Dreamy here for a short review. I liked this story. It felt like one of those century old short-novel, where the whole plot will be of one ...
Oct 19, 2014 -
Re: Homecoming (Part 2, Revised)
Hello there! :D I'll keep this short. I was teensy bit disappointed with Jim's departing scene. It felt a bit rushed. As if, you(the writer) didn't want to get all ...
Sep 13, 2014
