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Yes, you're right about Callista. It's kind of sad for Persephone having to take on the identity of this dead girl. In future chapters and when I revise the entire ...

Thanks Danni! I'll definitely tag you. Yes, I changed some things to make work in my story.

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Very sorry for your loss, rosette :( this is a very well written piece about him.

Thanks for reading, Thundahguy. The reason for the jump cut here is because the journey back from Poland to Greece would take a couple months, and the parts with her ...

It's ok, my Hades looks very "normal" compared to the other gods. The kind of guy you'd pass on the street and not look twice at, that's what she meant ...

In part 5 Persephone said in her internal thoughts: "Whoever he is, he must be a god, too. I wonder if I%u2019m going to make it out of this forest ...

Thank you for diving right in! I hope you enjoy the story!

Thank you for reading, Thundahguy. Glad the jump cut was bearable, haha.

Thanks for reading! So glad you're enjoying.

Hi Shima, Thanks for reading along so far! Hades has always been a mystery to people even in the traditional Greek myth. He tends to stay in the Underworld, and ...

Hi Thundahguy, thanks for reviewing this chapter. I agree with you that the transition to Artemis is a bit too sharp. I'll try to go over the pacing there and ...

Hi Thundahguy, thanks for reviewing so many of these chapters. This is actually part of the longer chapter - I just split it up into parts so it's not so ...

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