Dreamworx95

Thanks so much for reading :)

@shima

@shima

You always leave such thoughtful and constructive reviews. This is indeed a novel. I'm hoping to finish it by this coming February - I'm about 30k words in and hopefully ...

Thanks so much for continuing! I'm so glad to hear you're enjoying it so far. I am really enjoying writing it. In the next couple chapters, both issues you mentioned ...

Hi Holysocks, thank you for reading! The MC is a girl. Reading over the wet patches part it is pretty confusing. I meant taking advantage of the places where there ...

Thanks, Shima! At this point, I don't see the Arab heritage playing a significant role in the plot. Maybe in a sequel. I just wanted my version of Persephone to ...

Thank you for reading! There's hardly any dialogue in this piece though? lol

Thanks for reading!

Thanks for reading! I haven't read anything by Rick Riordan. There's similarity to his writing I think because he's one of the major authors who writes about the Greek/Roman pantheon.

Thanks so much for the review! I've always looked at Zeus as a bully. I'm fond of Hades, though. :)

Just wanted to say I love this.

Hi Shima, thank you for reading. I'm glad you seem to like this first part. Yes, the gods are real in this universe, and you're spot on about the Summoning ...

Hello, I enjoy this poem. It has potential to be even better. The title really strikes me with its directness. I enjoy the emphasis on "Eat something" and "Okay" like ...

So glad to hear that!