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This is a great suggestion, thank you for reading!!

Thank you for reading!!

Ahh, I'm sorry you couldn't find the terms when searching them up. I did a lot of deep internet research and checked out some books about ancient Persia from the ...

Thank you Aly!! I always look forward to your critiques!! I apologize about the over abundance of unfamiliar terms - the setting is based on Persia during the Safavid Dynasty. ...

Thank you for reading!! And thank you for your take on the racy scene at the end. Do you think the chapter as a whole starts a good place? Do ...

Hi Anma, I think this is the wrong story :)

Thank you for reading!! :D

Hi Aly, thank you for mentioning this. I don't know if it's that Hades sees anything particularly special about Persephone as much as it is that he sees her as ...

Awesome!

Hey Gnomish, I was just wondering if you read the previous chapter? Chapter 31?

Yeah, Hecate and Hades are both a few hundred years old, so I feel like they're mature enough to handle their personal issues. They're better as friends and allies than ...

Hey Gnomish, sorry to get back to you late on this. No, this is just my own twist. :)

So happy you enjoyed! I'm hoping to win RevPit this year and then hopefully start querying agents!

Hey girl, just one nit: they told me (to) be myself otherwise I love the structure and emotion of this poem Thank you for sharing!

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