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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Deleted 23

    Just returning the favor, dear ;) Now I was wondering when I would stumble across something along these lines from you. Not that the poem is melodramatic or anything of ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: you

    I had a bit of a sneaky suspicion you'd like morbid imagery when describing something under this certain topic. So I don't think I've ever reviewed anything of yours. Depressing, ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Listen carefully.

    The message is rather clear from the moment you start this piece until the moment it ends. My dear, I do apologize for such a late review. Long week and ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Long Road

    So this is an interesting poem. Very interesting indeed, though a little bit too sporadic for my tastes in certain regards. Of course, we shall go into that in a ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: crackling

    Dear, this might be the most real piece of poetry you've ever written. Reality aside, this is raw, and its beautiful in its rawness. It has this sort of ache, ...

    Dec 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Dinner.

    Ah, what an interesting idea indeed! I had to read this through a couple times after the first initial read simply because of the way in which the end sort ...

    Dec 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Playing with Matches

    First and foremost, I'm going to start of with what I'm sure you expected to hear from me, seeing as I'm pretty blatant about this certain topic in poetry. This ...

    Dec 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Cloud Dreams

    I think its about time you received a review from my, my dear Kafka. Far too long indeed. And as all my reviews seemed to be doing these days, I'll ...

    Dec 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Deleted 22

    My dear, this is lovely. I suppose there could be many things I could say about this poem for critical help, and tearing apart anything is really quite easy when ...

    Nov 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Broken

    Its nice to see that you have a taste for irony. Some writers spend their entire lives trying to create irony and never achieve it. This is so short and ...

    Nov 25, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Vimini

    I realize this is only one review in a sea of reviews, and that anything I have to say now will only, probably, be a repeat of what everyone else ...

    Nov 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Fallen Snow

    My dear, this is a fantastic start to imagery! And imagery is something so very necessary in poetry. In all honesty, imagery is very much important in prose as well, ...

    Nov 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: dear jane

    Interesting topic choice for so festive a season. Of course, anything that shows human flaw usually attracts me right into a piece, and in this case, I like the way ...

    Nov 25, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: An Ugly Girl

    Dear, you amaze me. Honestly, amaze. And because of that fact, its about time I gave you a real review. I know, its about time. That being said, I'm not ...

    Nov 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: What you taught me <3

    Oh deary, the spacing of this poem is not working for at all. First and foremost, take out those unnecessary break lines. It makes this poem looking dauntingly long rather ...

    Nov 15, 2011


You have to be a bit of a liar to tell a story the right way.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind