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Re: Chapter 1. Fire & Dark
I love this!! I was actually mad when Mark ran into the flames!! I was like "Whatt?! Mark you idiot!!" That was when we saw Mark pass us; he hadn’t ...
Sep 19, 2009 -
Re: A Harry Potter Parody
This is absolutely halarious, and is very well written. Keep up the good work. :D :D
Sep 19, 2009 -
Re: Crackers
I have just a few things to say: 1. Personally, I have had experiences like this one, so bravo for capturing it in words. 2. These kind of girls are ...
Sep 19, 2009 -
Re: The Way You Love Me
Overall, great poem. maybe you could try a rhyming one next time?? I disagree. Your first two lines of your verses were rhyming, and they were very good. Its a ...
Sep 19, 2009 -
Re: First Love
I called him my first love, but I didn't realize it. I told him he was my friend, but I didn't see it. This part really explains how she feels, ...
Sep 19, 2009