Dreamergirl

Heyy, This is nice, I like how you've frame the character of 'Miss A' comically, it's creates a really nice comic element in the story. I like how April's character ...

Heyy, I like the where the story is heading too, you're writing style is very unique, it makes me want to read more :) Though I still feel you could ...

I like how the poem flows, though there a few minor changes that could make it something much better :) Great effort, Keep writing ~ - Dreamergirl