Dream_Catcher

Poser: very simple but alright. Not a favorite i must admit. a few classic concepts that i've seen before though I do like the last line in mention of "selfish ...

I liked this poem and the way it was written and all. There was a minor spelling problem with strength in stanza 4 but other than that i didnt catch ...

i like this. i actually feel like i can relate 2 it a lot. Born to turn away my eyes from deception. i interpreted this as being told 2 turn ...

i like this and the concept. The only thing is that I think the last line kind of ruins it. It's a great poem and it gets you thinking truly ...

Above him two great sun hung in the sky, overlapping each other. I'm assuming you meant 'suns'. That's really the only grammar thing I noticed but I'm rather awful with ...

I enjoyed this a lot. I like the character and the situation. Even in the short amount of time you go through quite a few emotions. After meeting the ball ...