Dragongirl

I didn't like this story until the last line. And then he found another girl. And then I love it. I think you found your own unique to show the ...

Ok, you said you were havind a little trouble with this bit. Breathing hard, Jordin lowered her aching arms and jogged over to the next asignment. Tell's apple. The great ...

Okay, I read this a couple months back and liked it, so I today decided to check and see if you'd written any more. I was totally surprise by all ...

I don't think you could be human and not have this piece touch you, especially if you're an american. I really loved it. I thought you did a wonderful job ...

Okay, I hate you. Not really, but I am totally jealous. I never could have written anything as good as this piece when I was 14 and I have the ...

Sorry that I haven't got around to reviewing this sooner. I meant to but it totally slipped my mind. So, here I am, reviewing. :) Just to start off I ...

Bravo! Loved this! I was smiling and laughing the whole way through. I also found this easy to relate to. I mean, what little girl hasn't wanted a horse? I ...

Well written.... crummy message. I thought that this would end very differently, like I don't know..maybe her NOT comiting suicide. But my personal opinion aside, nicely done. I notice a ...

I found this poem to be thought prevoking and fresh. The thing I didn't like so much about it was that you see to be on the fence when it ...

I though this was a lovely idea, though perhaps a tad bit unoriginal, but still enjoyable. I felt, as others who reviewed, that this was a bit hard to read. ...

Not really sure where this is going. I clicked on it because I thought the name sounded interesting and I thought the way you used 'Levels' instead of chapters was ...

Chuckles. This story had me smiling and laughing the whole way through. When I read the title and saw you name underneath it, I'll be honest, I rolled my eyes ...

Top notch poem! I think it is a wonderfully goofy poem and is a great way to remind us 4-Hers not to take our selfs to seriously. :) favorite verse; ...

I like this. It grabbed my attention from the start and is fresh and different. You got me to thinking when you had Gracie ask which legend should be given ...

Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnoooooooooooo, *pause for a long breath, then..* Nnnnnnnoooooooooooooooo. I knew it, I knew he was going to die. Great story, great characters, great action- Lame predictable ending. Stra