Dragongirl

Holy cow Pyro! You've done it again. You managed to pack all three of these chapters chalk full with suspence and action, despite the fact that the entire town consisted ...

You were right, Peter is the worsed. Oh I hate him, I hate him, I hate him. Due to your top notch writing I will never be able to look ...

Excellent. Thoroughly enjoyable. I like the growth in John. The change you see in him. Really him becoming a man is what it is, I suppous. Thought Jane was a ...

Do you remember in the last review I did to this story? How I said I though the dialogue might be a bit stiff? Well, I want you to take ...

Dude, this rocks! I just finished reading all the chapters that you posted of this story and it is really good. You kept me on the edge of my seat ...

Not too sabby, MEG, I'm so happy you decided to post this story! You must hurry up and post the next chapter so then you can post the third chapter ...

Ohhh, this ending made me happy. You compleatly had me tricked. I just knew Windsor was going to die, and I was all like, there is no other way *sniff*sniff* ...

Nice! I really don't know what to say other than 'I love this!' and 'I must have more' :) What else can I say when it's already so dang good? ...

Wow. Thats all I can say. I just finish reading all 7chapters you've posted. You sure can write. You've put action, powers, and a christain theme in one story. I'm ...

I just finished reading all the chapters you have posted and let me just say This is such a great story! I love it! Dandelion is a great MC but ...

Excellent. Straight up good. I really enjoyed this piece. I normally like to put in a favorite line when I review a poem, but this have so many parts I ...

Nice, I like it. I haven't read any of the previous chapters but you've got me hooked. So I don't know for sure whats going on but let me just ...

Holy smokes, this is good!!! Let me just start out by say this was nothing like I expected it to be. Your desriptions rock. I felt like I could see ...

I like this. Kind of creepy, but good. Who knew those little kid fairy tales could be so scary. I don't know if you plan on making this a novel ...

All righty, this is the first of your story that I've read so I'm a little confused. However I think this is very very well written. The characters are interesting ...