Dragonette

I accidentally posted this review as a comment (*feels stupid* gosh I'm so done with this new format) But I'm reposting it here as a review because I need the ...

[EDIT] Whoops! Not used to the new format for the review thingie. Just ignore this for the moment, I'm working at getting you an actual review ;) P.S. I promise ...

Oooooh this is really good! The opening was captivating and your descriptions are beautiful and swimming with life. It seems to me that you have a pretty good story going ...

Wow this is A.M.A.Z.I.N.G I love how you intertwined the thunderstorm with the heart break. Great work. Great passion. Thank you for writing poetry and therefore adding flavor to the ...

I like it. You know, you're so lucky that you have the ability to write short stories. I've personally never been able to write one, I just can't get all ...

LoooOooOve it :smt003 I especially like the dancing part and the ending paragraph (which, btw, was a superb way to end it!). Although I couldn't relate to the whole "emerging ...

Hiya! I'm Dragonette and I will review your story for you today :D Now, I didn't have time to read the first part of your story :/ but I'm a ...

This was good. As usual ;) But my job here is to point out this stuff that could help you make it better. So here are my nit-picks :D Ok, ...

Hey, it's me again Comin' to review your story :D Alright, it's good as usual, but I have some stuff to point out. Firstly: “It's when your godly parent makes ...

Thanks to everyone read this all the way through. I don't know if I should write any more. I originally wrote this for a contest my sisters and I did, ...

Hey, Dragon-sis. Dragonette here to review your story :D This. Was. Amazing! Once again good grammar, description and flowing of the sentences. You did a really good job on the ...

Yes! Percy Jackson! You could basically say that I'm a nerd on this subject...but anywho! On to the reviewing :D As the story in general: I LOVED it :D This ...

Yes! I got first comment! Woot! Alright, so I'm not really into vampires, so I won't be much help with your plot. But I do have one thing to point ...

Hey! I'm Dragonette and I will be reviewing your story today! Just warning you, I haven't reviewed in a LONG time, but I'll try my best! So, you have a ...

As I've said before, you do a really good job, Luk- er, I mean, Sienna XD But really, you have good potential, you just need some basic grammar fixing. This ...