DragonWriter

I totally agree with snoik. If you keep editing and revising, the better it will get, the netter it get the more competition follows, which means every one will be ...

I can not please everyone pepol, first i do include everything in the story, then i take it out, now a person wants me to puit it back. first i ...

I like it. I love it, but i do not want more of it.

Man , i am getting sick and tired of editting! However i will do some more. One day though when i am big and poreful, i am going to to ...

It is okay! Add a lilttle more dialect and it will be better. You have a great storry idea hidden in it. it is you job to polish this storry ...

Umm, let me think, this is [s]confusing[/s] no it is differnt. I like how it leads but :twisted: YOu had to have a cliffhanger.

I absolutely love this story. YOu have plenty of deatils, just enough dialaect and well i am in love with this story. THis story makes you feel the aggravation of ...

I like it, i agree it was some confusing. I think it was a dragon, though. It has pleanty of destil though , no need for more.

It is pretty good, however it sounds like a girl in blue. WHich is about a girl who sneaks off to the war , trying to escsape a marrige. Then ...