Dr.Awesome

Hmm. It's intersting, and I definitly want you to continue, but it's pretty short for a post; I wish you had written more. That way mor would be explained, because ...

This story was pretty cool. It has the potential to become a big, epic adventure. I'm not much of a grammar geek so I'm not going to dwell on those ...

I've never seen a story based on this before, but I after reading it I can't understand why? It was a great character study, and you portrayed a very realistic ...

Ooh, I like what I see! The beginning was a great hook, and your vocabulary built up the suspense nicely. Just like the reviewer above me stated, this is a ...