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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Waiting

    Hey Talkingbird :) I've read the book, and I think the theme you having going on here goes along with it. The whole feeling of wanting to leave is expressed ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Broken Mind

    Wow. All I can say is that this is a very powerful poem. Just through your writing style, I can imagine the thought process of someone that's been "broken." Also, ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Summer

    Hey, I really liked this. You channeled your experiences quite well. The summer seemed to Swiftly go, as Taylor sang her soothing tones. I thought this part was really clever ...

    Aug 4, 2011


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