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Re: I'm really good at vomiting (pt2)
Woah!! I really love this idea. Here are some questions: Are these supposed to be in order? I'm not getting the linear vibe. Is there a reason you put that ...
Oct 3, 2017 -
Re: I'm really good at photoshop (pt 1)
Loving this! So excited to read part two. I really like the characterization of Julian and the protagonist. I also enjoy the protagonist's sass. It compliment's Julian nicely! Your strong ...
Oct 3, 2017 -
Re: Firefly
Cool idea! Here's my review. Nitpicks: * I, personally think that waking up and looking in the mirror are cliched. I would do it differently, like maybe she just had ...
Oct 3, 2017 -
Re: Fried Expectations
I loved the humor in this story. The way that your narrator talks is very fun to read! I also like that it feels real, like your old friend is ...
May 25, 2017