Diva

WOW! its the best piece of writing in my opinion. Hats off to you for using this amazing platform that thewebsite has given to you! Via you need to forget ...

I agree with the above views at places.I thought it was not very well thought out but still hats off too you for explaining your thoughts in happens to every ...

I liked the concept of a girl and boy's first kiss the kind of feelings that you have put down in your story seem real and i'm sure everybody's first ...

The different colours in the rainbow actually made me smile and as one of the writers above said your use of symbolism was good although you can improve it by ...

I think overall it was a good story when i read it surely made me think that the writer has put forward a realistic scenario that usually takes place nowdays.Although ...