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(I was alarmed when I realized that you had complimented my reviews without me actually having given you one. So here I am! :D ) I want to hug your ...

Hey there, Yuri. :) I should say that I very much liked the title of this. I was a little on the fence thematically once I'd finished, but then my ...

She turns and smiles at me. We’ve been together for almost 7 months now and life has never been better. I don’t know what it is but I know that ...

Ugh. That was SO GOOD. So good that I want to put my final comments and suggestions before the nitpicking I did on some technical and general workings of the ...

This is lovely! My favorite part was definitely the voice. Usually parodies and satire get a little grating from the narrator's influence and/or references, but I thought you struck a ...

Really interesting. Kind of chilling, too! I'll admit it: I love dialogues. They almost always lead to very quick and concise character definition, and this one is no different. I ...

Look: Acre City’s littlest crime fighter was standing alone in the southernmost district of the Swats. He was watching himself on the television that was mounted on the side of ...

Whew, this makes me want to go back to my days of reading hardcore fantasy. With your style of prologue and then dark, strange character POV, as well as the ...

Aw. I love flash fiction for pieces exactly like this one: very clear snapshots of human life. The pace of this piece was perfect-- slow and smooth. You also managed ...

Okay, wow. I agree with this so much it's ridiculous. Especially the parts about not dating guys younger than you when you're younger and the puppy thing. It's just such ...

Ooo. This was so cool. Like a dark, intense Toy Story. I really liked the way you incorporated the lulluby. The song's presence added another layer to the story (and, ...

Hey, dude. Do you know that I've never actually critiqued this? (Yes you do.) This piece frustrates me with its perfection and self-stability. I assessed it from a lot of ...

I'm such a sucker for things with these sorts of titles. Case File, Case Study, Evaluation...triggers my intrigue. :) To that end, I kind of like retaining "Case File #5" ...