Devochka303

OK this is really great regarding use of Elizabethan language. There are some things from my opinion that you could improve on: to plant their frothy, wisped kiss this could ...

I really like how the poem has in depth meaning. It also leaves you guessing on what it is based on and how it's written. I would improve on the ...

"But I realized later, it had been a candle of hope." that is a very great sentence that draws in attention. Also I don't know if it is something you ...