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Re: Chapter Eleven of The Lost Legend - The First Relic.
Try use more descriptive words to describe the character. I love the series and want to read more though so don't stop writing. Also, could you describe the character's surroundings ...
Apr 23, 2013 -
Re: Chapter Thirteen of The Lost Legend - Good, Bad, and In-between.
Try use more descriptive words to describe the character. I love the series and want to read more though so don't stop writing. Also, could you describe the a bit ...
Apr 23, 2013 -
Re: Of Little Consequence
Try use more descriptive words to describe the character. I love the series and want to read more though so don't stop writing. Also, could you describe the side characters ...
Apr 22, 2013 -
Re: A Clash of Harmony and War, Book 1 - Prologue, Part 2
Try use more descriptive words to describe the character. I love the series and want to read more though so don't stop writing. Also, could you describe the side characters ...
Apr 22, 2013 -
Re: Hard decision
Try use more descriptive words to describe the character. I love the series and want to read more though so don't stop writing. Also, could you describe the side characters ...
Apr 22, 2013 -
Re: Chapter Eighteen of The Lost Legend - Mind Training Center.
Try use more descriptive words to describe the character. I love the series and want to read more though so don't stop writing. Also, could you describe the side characters ...
Apr 22, 2013 -
Re: Unleashed:Awakened part six of a book
I mean like, use more descriptive words to describe the character. It can be old fashioned like "scum" or it could be more modern like "piece of crap." I love ...
Apr 22, 2013