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DevanshiKhetarpal

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Going Insane, or Not

    This was okay. I'd say that the poem was too short for my fancy. I think two or three more stanzas should do. I agree with Catcha01 that it should ...

    May 11, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: War of all against all

    This was good, though. I believe that you could still do with a bit of improvement. Perhaps, you could've used some more poetic devices to improve your poem. Moreover, a ...

    May 11, 2013


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